Thursday, January 22, 2009

E-CARD REFLECTION

what i liked.
what i liked about my e-card was the begining. i like the fisrt three scenes the best. i like the first one ( the face) because i think it is interesting and creative, it make you look at the card and pay attention to it more. i also like the second one (buildings, hospital) because i like how the buildings are crooked, they are all mishaped or slanted. it gives and interesting appeal to the scene, also with the adiition of the ambulance going across the screen it allows your eyes to move around the page. and lastly i like the hall because again the doors were slightly slanted and looked different than an average door, it just added somthing you don't see everyday.

what i didn't like.
what i didn't like about my e-card were mainly the cartoons and the sound. the cartoon people didn't look as if i wanted, they were boring and anybody could of done them, i wish they were interesting and each their own individual instead of looking identical to the ones in the other room. i didn't like the sounds because i only had it in one area of the card. i wish i could of used a real ambulance siren as well as add music throughout the entire e-card.

what i would change with more time and material.
if i had more time while making my e-card i would add more sounds, have music playing throughout the entire clip. i would also try to make the characters on the card more realistic or just better cartoons. if they were all completly different and in different rooms i think it would be better. i would try to connect the begining to the end better, the begining has different colours and types of shapes (the face, the buildings) where as the hospital rooms are completly different, i would just want to change them so they flow together better.

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