What do I like about my movie?
Some of the things I like about my movie are the way the story flows, the sound matches with the actions and it tells a story. I think that it flows well because it is easy to watch and you know what is going on.The reason i think the sound matches with the actions are because as soon as a new clip starts the music is starts as well. I think this movie does tell the story of a father losing his child because it shows the sequence in which the baby begins to roll down the hilll and everything in between these actions leading up to the crash and the baby's death.
What do I not like about my movie?
Some of the things that i do not like about my movie are the jumps in between some of the clips, the way the sounds are mostly the same and the length. I think there were too many jumps because there was no transition just one clip to the next, there could of more possibilities with more film. I don't like the way the sounds are the same because i had to use so much of the same sounds just because there were not any others that would fit the story. I also didn't like the length because i feel as though i had to stretch out so many clips just to make it close to minute which made it kind of boring.
What would I change if I had more time/materials?
Some of the things that I would change with more time and materials would be I would add more similar scenes from different movies, I would use more sounds that work better with the movie, and I would also maybe have a slightly different story line. I would add more scenes just to add to the movie and not have it so stretched out with the same scene. I would use sounds that fit better with the movie that help make it more consistant. I may change the movie as well just to add better clips that may develop the storyline and make it easier to understand.
Movie Link:
Tuesday, September 9, 2008
Wednesday, September 3, 2008
Story Board
scene1: building with lots of stairs
scene 2: baby begins to roll down the stairs
scene 3: the man at the end throws hands up to protect himself
scene 4: the woman and man are screaming in fear
scene 5: back to the man about to be hit
scene 6: there is smoke everywhere as the man is hit
scene 7: "the next morning" man in hospital waiting room(maybe extra)
scene1: building with lots of stairs
scene 2: baby begins to roll down the stairs
scene 3: the man at the end throws hands up to protect himself
scene 4: the woman and man are screaming in fear
scene 5: back to the man about to be hit
scene 6: there is smoke everywhere as the man is hit
scene 7: "the next morning" man in hospital waiting room(maybe extra)
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